StoryBrand Marketing Agency

Is Your Marketing Message So Confusing Even Your Own Mom Doesn’t Get It?

We're an award-winning StoryBrand Marketing Agency that helps Service Businesses clarify their messaging so everyone wants to work with you!

Build trust and authority in your industry

Connect with CLIENTS WHO ACTUALLY GET IT

MARKETING THAT FEELS NATURAL

WATCH THIS VIDEO

If your message isn’t landing—and the right clients aren’t showing up—it’s not your fault. Most service business owners are great at what they do. They just struggle to talk about it clearly.

In this video, I’ll walk you through how we fix that using the StoryBrand Framework, plus how to get started with either DIY or done-for-you options.

WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOUR MESSAGE ISN’T CLEAR

Can your mom explain what you do?

Can you easily explain what you do?

Can anyone?

If not, that's the problem we fix.

Because when people don’t understand what you do, they move on. You end up working harder just to stay in the game.

  • You’re always re-explaining yourself

  • Your website doesn’t convert visitors into clients

  • Your leads aren’t the right fit

  • Referrals become scarce

  • Marketing is frustrating as all hell

But it doesn’t have to be this way. A clear message makes all of that easier. It’s the difference between chasing leads—and attracting the right ones.

You might not believe it yet, but marketing can actually be the opposite of frustrating when you're doing it right.

MAKE YOUR MARKETING Simpler

Whether you want to learn the system or hand it over completely, the goal is the same: clear messaging that brings in better clients with less effort.

A DIY SYSTEM THAT’S SIMPLE TO FOLLOW

Join the StoryBrand Course

for weekly group coaching, templates, and a proven system that fits seamlessly into your week—without taking over your life.

.

COACHING THAT MEETS YOU WHERE YOU ARE

Want someone to walk you through it? Get 1:1 or team coaching to clarify your message and apply the StoryBrand Framework to your business in real time.

.

DONE-FOR-YOU MARKETING

Too busy to do it yourself? We’ll build your messaging, write your copy, create the assets you need, and handle your StoryBrand marketing—so you can stay focused on running your business.

HI, I'm Vicky Sidler

And I’VE BEEN WHERE YOU ARE

I know how it feels to stare at your marketing and think, “Why isn’t this working?” That's why I created a StoryBrand Marketing Agency.

All in all, your business isn’t just another brick in the wall—it’s something special. Your story matters, and I’m here to help you share it in a way that feels real, connects with people, and gets results.

  • As a certified StoryBrand Guide, I specialize in turning complicated ideas into clear, compelling messages that resonate with your audience.

  • With a background in journalism, I’ve spent decades telling stories that matter and crafting content people want to read.

  • I’ve developed a proven system to help businesses like yours cut through all the AI trash that's out there and build genuine connections with their audience.

Your story isn’t just important—it’s the reason people will choose your business. Let’s make sure it’s heard loud and clear by the people who need it most.

And sorry if I got Pink Floyd stuck in your head just now...

Hear Directly from DONALD MILLER

In this short clip, StoryBrand’s founder Donald Miller explains why clear messaging and a simple marketing plan change everything.

Donald shares why newsletters are back, what a full StoryBrand campaign includes, and how a certified guide helps you focus on what actually works—without wasting money or time.

Watch to see how working with a StoryBrand Certified Guide can make a measurable difference for your business.

EVERYTHING STORYBRAND, ALL IN ONE PLACE

Whether you need help with strategy, websites, content, or SEO, I offer the full range of StoryBrand marketing services—done with you or done for you.

StoryBrand Framework

StoryBrand Wireframe

StoryBrand Websites

StoryBrand SEO

StoryBrand Video

StoryBrand Copywriting

StoryBrand Email Sequences

StoryBrand Marketing Funnels

StoryBrand Workshops

StoryBrand Consulting

StoryBrand PPC

StoryBrand Lead Generation

StoryBrand
Social Media

StoryBrand Strategy

StoryBrand Content Marketing

StoryBrand Local Service

StoryBrand Coaching

MARKETING THAT DOESN’T TAKE OVER YOUR LIFE

Whether you want to build it yourself or hand it off completely, as a StoryBrand Marketing Agency, we’ll give you a clear message and a simple system that actually works.

1

BOOK A COFFEE CHAT

This is a no-pressure, non-sales call where we discuss what’s working, what’s not, and where you want to go.

.

https://assets.cdn.filesafe.space/kJ0HTx71roamzOBLLJ9Q/media/66215c9b78944a2e943c19b3.jpeg

2

CHOOSE YOUR PATH

Get hands-on support through the StoryBrand Course, 1:1 or team coaching, or let me build the entire marketing system for you—messaging, website, emails, and more.

.

.

3

FIX YOUR MARKETING

Walk away with a message that resonates, a plan that’s easy to follow, and marketing that works while you sleep and finally delivers results.

COFFEE’S ON ME (OK, NOT REALLY)

But I'm serious about helping you connect with your audience. Let’s grab a coffee (on Zoom) and chat about your marketing goals.

  • Wondering how to simplify your message? Let’s talk.

  • Ready to stand out in an AI-saturated world? I’ve got ideas.

  • Just need clarity? I’ll help you see the big picture.

This isn’t a sales call—just a friendly, low-pressure chat. At the very least, you’ll walk away with some cool ideas you can try on your own.

SCHEDULE YOUR COFFEE CHAT WITH ME (VICKY) TODAY

FIXING YOUR MARKETING SHOULDN’T FEEL IMPOSSIBLE

Most small business owners aren’t marketers—they just want to explain what they do in a way that makes people care.

But when the message isn’t clear, everything else gets harder: websites don’t convert, leads go cold, and social posts fall flat.

You might worry that getting it right will take too much time, cost too much money, or feel like just another online course you’ll never finish.

That’s why I offer three simple paths: do-it-together support through the StoryBrand Course, 1:1 and team coaching, or done-for-you services where I build your full funnel myself.

You’ll get clear messaging, practical templates, and real support—so your marketing finally works and your business actually grows.

YOUR QUESTIONS, ANSWERED

We know marketing can feel overwhelming, and you probably have questions. That’s why we’ve put together answers to the things people ask us most.

What makes Strategic Marketing Tribe different from other StoryBrand marketing agencies?

We’re the StoryBrand marketing agency that skips the boring "corporate speak." We blend the power of StoryBrand with strategic marketing solutions to craft content that feels human, genuine, and impossible to ignore.

How can your strategic marketing solutions benefit my business?

Our strategic marketing solutions simplify your message, clarify your brand story, and help you connect with your ideal customers. It’s marketing that makes sense and gets results – no jargon, no gimmicks, just growth.

What is StoryBrand, and why does it matter?

Think of StoryBrand as a cheat sheet for marketing clarity. It helps you explain what you do in a way that makes people stop, listen, and say, “Oh, I get it.” We use it to create marketing that feels human and that your audience will actually enjoy reading.

Do I need to be familiar with StoryBrand to work with you?

Not at all! Whether you’re a StoryBrand superfan (like us!) or have no idea what it is, we’ll walk you through everything. We’re here to make the process simple, clear, and (dare we say) fun.

How do I know if this is right for my business?

If people keep saying “I don’t really get what you do,” or you’re getting the wrong kind of leads, it’s a sign your message needs work. That’s what we fix.

What if I don’t have time to take a course?

The course is built for time-strapped business owners. You get short lessons, plug-and-play templates, and live support so you’re never stuck or overwhelmed.

What’s the difference between the course and the done-for-you service?

The course gives you training, tools, and weekly support so you can do it yourself. The done-for-you option means I build your whole funnel for you.

How long does it take to see results?

Most people see clearer messaging and better engagement within a week of applying the one-liner. Bigger results (like leads and conversions) follow as you apply it across your marketing.

What if I’ve already tried StoryBrand and it didn’t work?

Many people try to apply StoryBrand on their own and miss key parts. This course walks you through it step-by-step, with real examples and live feedback from a Certified Guide.

STORY, MEET STRATEGY

Let’s make marketing feel less robotic and more real. Find resources from a StoryBrand Marketing Agency that bring your message—and your business—to life.

Use These Two Words to Instantly Improve Your Marketing

Use These Two Words to Instantly Improve Your Marketing

December 26, 20258 min read
Custom HTML/CSS/JAVASCRIPT

By Vicky Sidler | Published 26 December 2025 at 12:00 GMT+2

Sometimes a YouTube video drops a marketing truth so simple you feel a little embarrassed for ever using words like "solutioning" or "synergy." That’s exactly what happened when Donald Miller, bestselling author and messaging expert, dropped this gem: Two words. That’s all it takes to get better at marketing.

He explained it in his recent video, and I’ll walk you through it, minus the clickbait pauses and mid-sentence teasers. This one is practical, powerful, and usable today.


TL;DR:

  • The human brain craves simplicity

  • “Shouldn’t” and “won’t” help position your product as the hero

  • This works across industries, from dentists to software

  • Repeat it everywhere: ads, emails, conversations

👉 Need help getting your message right? Download the 5-Minute Marketing Fix


Table of Contents:


The Marketing Problem Most Businesses Have:

Most small businesses struggle to explain what they do. Not because they’re unclear. But because they’re trying too hard to sound smart.

The result? Complicated words, too many ideas, and a website header that reads like a technical manual.

Here’s the harsh truth: every time you use clever or complex language, you make your customer feel stupid. And confused people do not buy.

According to Donald Miller, the solution is not to try harder. It’s to say less. Specifically, say these two words.

What Are the Two Words?

Ready? The words are “shouldn’t” and “won’t.” That’s it.

They may not look like much, but these two little words pack a punch when used together. Think of them as the peanut butter and jelly of marketing statements.

  • “You shouldn’t have to deal with that problem”

  • “And when you work with us, you won’t

Simple. Relatable. Effective.

Let’s break it down.

Why “Shouldn’t” and “Won’t” Work:

1. They highlight pain and offer relief:

“Shouldn’t” shines a light on what’s wrong. It gives your customer language for their frustration.

“Won’t” offers the outcome they actually want. It gives hope. And hope sells.

This combo frames your offer as the bridge between a problem and a better future.

2. They work with how brains actually make decisions:

Behavioral studies show people are 2.5 times more likely to act to avoid loss than to pursue a gain. That’s not just marketing theory. It’s neuroscience.

You could say, “Save money with our service,” but it’s stronger to say, “You shouldn’t waste money on poor service—and with us, you won’t.”

The first sounds like a benefit. The second feels like protection.

How to Use This in Real Life:

Let’s say you own a guesthouse: “You shouldn’t have to settle for uncomfortable beds. And at Mt Horeb Manor, you won’t.”

Or maybe you run a VA business: “You shouldn’t be stuck doing admin. With our team at EVA, you won’t.”

This approach works for:

  • Medical clinics

  • Coaches

  • Financial advisors

  • SaaS platforms

  • Retail

  • Restaurants

  • Education

  • B2B services

If your business solves any kind of problem—and every real business does—you can use this.

Where to Use It:

These aren’t just words for your website. Repeat this soundbite across every touchpoint:

  • Facebook ads

  • Email subject lines

  • Sales decks

  • Social bios

  • Discovery calls

  • Even how you answer, “So what do you do?”

Repetition is not annoying. It’s effective. The average person needs to hear a message five to seven times before they remember it. So say it. Then say it again.

Common Mistakes to Avoid:

1. Trying to sound clever:

Cleverness makes you feel smart. Clarity makes you money.

2. Skipping the emotional trigger:

This formula works because it taps into emotion. Don’t water it down with safe corporate-speak. Say the thing that’s bothering your customer. Then promise it won’t continue.

3. Changing your message too fast:

If it feels repetitive to you, it’s just starting to work on them.

Need an Example for Your Business?

Here are a few more:

  • Insurance broker: You shouldn’t feel lost reading your policy. With our team, you won’t.

  • Wedding planner: You shouldn’t be stressed on your big day. With us, you won’t.

  • IT support: You shouldn’t lose sleep over tech issues. With us, you won’t.

Where Most Small Businesses Go Wrong:

As a StoryBrand Certified Guide and Duct Tape Marketing Consultant, I’ve worked with hundreds of businesses trying to explain what they do. The ones that grow fastest don’t try to sound fancy. They get sharp on what the customer is struggling with and speak plainly about how they solve it.

If you want help doing the same, start here.

Download my free 5-Minute Marketing Fix, and you’ll walk away with one clear sentence that explains what your business does and why it matters.

And you shouldn’t have to write that alone. With this tool, you won’t.

👉 Download it free here.


Related Articles:

1. Ideal Client Profile: The Marketing Shortcut Small Businesses Miss

If you want your “shouldn’t” and “won’t” message to actually hit home, you need to know who it’s for. This post helps you define your perfect-fit customer.

2. Marketing Hourglass Explained: A Smarter Way to Grow Your Small Business

Once your messaging is sharp, it needs to show up in the right places. This article breaks down where and when to use it for real results.

3. Brand Strategy Framework on One Page? Here’s How with Duct Tape Marketing

If you liked the simplicity of “shouldn’t” and “won’t,” this one-page strategy framework will help you keep your entire marketing plan just as clear.

4. Content Marketing Boosts Revenue More Than Ads

Great messaging belongs everywhere—not just on your website. This post shows why using your new soundbite in blogs and videos can generate long-term growth.

5. Freelancer vs Agency vs Employee for Digital Marketing

Thinking of hiring someone to help rewrite your copy using this new formula? This guide walks through your best hiring options based on cost and capacity.


Frequently Asked Questions About Using “Shouldn’t” and “Won’t” in Marketing

1. Why do “shouldn’t” and “won’t” work so well in marketing?

They highlight the customer’s pain point and promise a solution in one short phrase. This taps into the brain’s natural drive to avoid pain and seek relief—exactly what drives most buying decisions.

2. Can I use this in a B2B business?

Absolutely. Whether you sell software, consulting, or office chairs, your buyer still has frustrations they want to avoid. This approach works as long as your offer solves a real problem.

3. Does this mean I should stop using benefit-driven headlines?

Not necessarily. This is about layering. You can still talk about benefits, but pairing them with emotional triggers like “you shouldn’t have to…” helps you connect faster and more powerfully.

4. How often should I use this “shouldn’t/won’t” soundbite?

Often enough that your customers could repeat it. Use it in your ad copy, website, emails, social posts, and even your sales conversations. Consistency is what makes it stick.

5. What if I don’t solve a painful problem?

Then look for friction. Even luxury products solve an emotional need—guilt, overwhelm, uncertainty. “You shouldn’t feel guilty for wanting something beautiful” is still valid messaging.

6. Where should I put this on my website?

Your homepage hero section is a great place to start. You can also use it in product descriptions, landing pages, and testimonials. Anywhere you need to grab attention and create a fast connection.

7. Can I make this the core of my marketing message?

Yes. In fact, that’s the point. This is a shortcut to clarity. If people remember one sentence about your business, this is the one you want them repeating.

8. What if I need help writing my “shouldn’t/won’t” line?

Start by thinking about what frustrates your ideal customer and what your service promises to change. Or use the5-Minute Marketing Fix to help shape your core message.

blog author image

Vicky Sidler

Vicky Sidler is a seasoned journalist and StoryBrand Certified Guide with a knack for turning marketing confusion into crystal-clear messaging that actually works. Armed with years of experience and an almost suspiciously large collection of pens, she creates stories that connect on a human level.

Back to Blog
Strategic Marketing Tribe Logo

Is your Marketing Message so confusing even your own mom doesn’t get it? Let's clarify your message—so everyone wants to work with you!

StoryBrand Certified Guide Logo
StoryBrand Certified Guide Logo
Duct Tape Marketing Consultant Logo
50Pros Top 10 Global Leader Award
Woman Owned Business Logo

Created with clarity (and coffee)

© 2025 Strategic Marketing Tribe. All rights reserved.

Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Sitemap